Lyrics help...PLz comment or say something on the tagboard negative or positive all accepted just dont copy it even if it sucks

Well i came up with an intro to a song i would be calling homecoming..so here it goes..

Little tree with and empty water can
Hollow skull and a crack upon the cheek
Crack of dawn the black night here it comes'
Summertime the blues are drawing
The seagulls in search of homecoming...

Well it is about making the world a better place in general...Little tree with an empty water can would mean the children who dont have enough food or water to survive...Hollow skull and a crack upon the cheek meaning the lack of education to the LDCs and also the disablity...Crack of dawn meaning the moment you wake up and black night meaning problems like murder,rape, stuff that will endanger lives like tsunamis and stuff...Summertime the blues are drawing the seagulls in search of homecoming,meaning finding a place to live..the conditions are so bad they have to keep migrating.